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Here’s something I wrote a few months ago on fimfiction; it’s called “Privet Sestronka” (which refers to an old soviet song named that, it translates to Hello Sister).
 
It’s a one-shot (as of writing this) about a vet of the Soviet-Afghan war coming to Equestria after dying in an ambush.
 
Link to the story:  
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/512988/privet-sestronka

Oh, I’m a bit late to the party, but I have a long fic I’m working on. Link.
 
It’s meant to be disturbing, bleak, and depressing so I know it’s far from everybody’s cup of tea.
 
Still, it has quite a few dislikes, and I’m wondering what I could be doing better. I obviously won’t change plot important aspects retroactively, but I’d still appreciate some feedback on it, if only to know what to look out for in the future.

@DragonSam98  
I don’t have the time to read it at the moment. I’ll try to get to it soon.

@acres
 
Thank you! :D

@DragonSam98  
I liked it. It was a good story.

@Havoc
 
I figured. XD
 
This story is basically an AU Crossover of Attack on Titan, and MLP. It’s also meant to be an alternate ending to season 9, as well as a what if for both AoT and MLP.
 
I’ve written it in a way that’s fairly easy to follow, even if you’ve never seen either show. I have IRL friends who’ve enjoyed it. ^^
 
As far as feedback goes, I’ll take anything. :P
 
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yGq0p1VnOPKjMk0Ce8q6ucWuvvMZoqnA4VetbSfqRJ0/edit?usp=sharing

@DragonSam98  
Of course! IMO It’s only necroposting if you mention how “dead” a thread is.

@Havoc
 
I don’t know if this is active 2 months later, but if it is…Would posting a link be okay?

Post your ideas, drafts, etc for fanfiction with and about adult topics such as horror, politics, high fantasy, and the likes.