Oh, I’m a bit late to the party, but I have a long fic I’m working on.
Link.
It’s meant to be disturbing, bleak, and depressing so I know it’s
far from everybody’s cup of tea.
Still, it has quite a few dislikes, and I’m wondering what I could be doing better. I obviously won’t change plot important aspects retroactively, but I’d still appreciate some feedback on it, if only to know what to look out for in the future.