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A semi-festive Sunset Shimmer. Unshaded as now, but I plan on putting the final touches on it tomorrow.
 
Feel free to offer feedback of any kind!
 
The shaded version is up! >>2739268

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Napsack
Rampant Stag - A swift sidekick
Rampant Squirrel - A ferocious friend
Fried Chicken - Attended an april fools event
Chatty Kirin - A user who has reached a combined 1000 forum posts or comments.
Donor | Pinkie Pie - Pie family best family
Liberty Belle -

Senior Moderator
Glare Mare
@Havoc  
I’m happy to know my advice helped. This does look a lot smoother than your last few pieces. I’ll be interested to see the shaded version when it’s up.
Havoc
Fried Chicken - Attended an april fools event
Artist - shidtist
U Lil Shid - Hi, Im a lil shid.
Chatty Kirin - A shidder who has reached 1000 combined forum shids or comments.
Liberty Belle - Shids the song of the unshidded

Half Dragon, Half Meme
@Napsack  
Thanks! I messed up the layering mainly by not putting the linework in their own layers. I used a lot of the previous advise you give and it’s much better because of it. And I was aware that hinds weren’t right, but I didn’t feel like surfing the web for an hour to figure it out at the time.
 
I just finished the shaded version, will post a little later so it’s not buried in the daily import.
Napsack
Rampant Stag - A swift sidekick
Rampant Squirrel - A ferocious friend
Fried Chicken - Attended an april fools event
Chatty Kirin - A user who has reached a combined 1000 forum posts or comments.
Donor | Pinkie Pie - Pie family best family
Liberty Belle -

Senior Moderator
Glare Mare
Looking pretty decent. Rear legs don’t work like that on ponies, but aside from that the anatomy is good. You might want to work on your linework a bit as well, because I can see some layering errors where background details are over foreground ones. There’s also some areas where the colouring needs touching up because I can see the background through them, mostly around the edges of the linework.
 
That said, I like this christmas poner.