I Made Something

I drew some things and I want to know what others think of it. Any critique or advice I don’t mind, because I just want to git gud.  
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I liked it.
 
Will there be more?

@acres  
Ah, sadly no. You can however have this other thing I made when I was in the middle of drawing Octavia falling back.  
It was originally supposed to go on just a bit more; I decided to end it on the frame that inspired this whole thing in the first place. The reason why I cut it short is because this took me far too much longer than I wanted it.  
I was simply burnt out by this and resenting it. Not long after watching this video was when I decided to stop coloring it https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tt2sOZu4eRU  
I just desperately wanted it to be over, especially so I could move on to make different drawings, which I occasionally did when I procrastinated and took hiatuses from this big project.  
Hearing that even one person liked it is great.