This one is by FynTheCat. She communicated much more with me. We sat down to discuss the colour possibilities, and she even made two sketches of different poses and I had to choose one.
I am glad about this drawing too but I always had the feeling that something’s really off. I never talked about it but today - while scanning and editing - I finally realised the issue: Moon’s star (facial coat marking) is missing!
Moon looks more natural in this one as in a bit shyer, on the grass, and less styled hair and eyelashes. I especially like that the pony has actual hooves.
Unfortunately and as expected, the colours are a bit off due to the scanner. I can see the issue especially on the grass, which turned out lighter and less uniform.