Original Description:
Primal glided over Sugar Cube corner and past Town Hall, it had been a welcoming day as the weather was just perfect for a little fly around Ponyville. Looking down from the skies, her ears perked at the sounded of trumpets blaring not far from Town Hall. Making her perch on a cloud, she surveyed the ground for whatever would cause such a noise. Letting out a silent gasp, her eyes met the sight of the princess, WhisperDream. Primal had completely forgotten about the princess visiting today and gazed down in awe. As the princess rolled down the street, Primal couldnt help but become deeply induced into looking upon the beautiful princess. With delicate motions the princess waved to the crowding ponies as they welcomed her with delight. Tapping her chin, Primal couldnt quite remember the princesss exact business for being in Ponyville, perhaps just paying a visit?? As the princess made her way to Town Hall, Primal watched in sublime interest at the lovely princess. She resembled her mother highly and had the same grace to her. Perking her ears, a strange voice caught the odd pegasi
s ears. Twitching them, her vision was directed to the stomping paws of an angry bear. Gasping, Primals eyes darted from the princess to the bear. It was going right towards her?! Clenching her jaw, Primal scrambled to her hooves and spread her wings, dashing down. "Look out!!!!!!!!!!" Primal shouted as the bear continued to barrel toward the princess and the crowd. A gentle gasp sounded from Whisper Dream as right as the bear really swiped its claws at her, something tumbled into her, pushing her out of the way. An odd looking pegasus had pushed her out of the way and now stood in her protect. Letting out a hard puff of air, Primal reared on her hind legs and stomped in competition of the bear. Letting out a rumbling growl, the creature dug its claws into the earth as it stared at the pegasi. Huffing through her nostrils, Primal puffed out her wings and prodded towards the bear, scraping her hooves on the ground in challenge. The bear shrunk down a bit in this display until the pegasus was nearly at its paws. Letting out a whimper, the bear grumbled and looked down in same. Smiling, Primal gave the bear
s tough leg a gentle pet and it let out a grumble in approval before lumbering onto its feet and padded away.
Letting out a sigh of relief, Primal turned around as to leave but was met with an unfamiliar figure blocking her path. Looking up, Primals eyes met with those of a glittering pond. Gulping, the pegasus slightly shrunk away as she realized it was Whisper Dream. " You save me," the alicorn said with a gentle tone that was like silver. "Uh yea... s-sure I-i uhm yea?" Primal stuttered, feeling her feathers ruffle up and her face burn. 'S-she
s really beautiful..’ Primal thought as her eyes darted away.
Whisper Dream let out a chuckled of delight. ‘How cute…’ the princess thought as she inspected the half pegasi-donkey. As voices became more clear, Primal`s vision darted to the crowding ponies, yelling of how she was a hero or asking if the princess was alright.
“W-well, i uh, gotta go!!!” Primal said quickly, taking off from the center of the crowd in a hurry. Whisper Dream squinted her eyes at the dust that flew up and glanced down at the ground, finding a single brown feather from her savior. Bringing it to her chest, the princess smiled and glanced once more in the direction of her savior and turned her attention back to the crowd of ponies.