Well, I needed the strength to make myself not skip these two panels, as I did in the most beginning. Because .. well, the plot doesn’t have to waste time, you need to go ahead needless things and here I feel a very awkward feeling where the script just stops and tells you - wow, wow, hold your horses partner, we need to make more references to the original show so that not do our job! Well, I understand you, oh Mighty Reference to the origin, I know why you’re here, I mean, probably we all are, and ready to let you go with it, but I would personally call it a lazy writting. These are just two panels that happen at the click of anyone fingers who doesn’t want to explain the thirst of three children to go hunting wild animals in a forest with weapons alone. Thirst for adrenaline? Bad manners education? Label cutie-mark addiction?! Oh, of course! Guys! it’s just a their darn hobby! Well, this is a good explanation, but instead of softly underlining it, we just throw it that yes, these gentle weak creatures just want to catch a beast in the forest. You know, why bother? I would have earned mine cutie-mark by just starin’ on hats all day, and later everyone would start to deify me in it, because it’s now my cutie-f**n’-mark! What’s wrong with these three freaks??!

I drew it 1-2 hours per day on the last 4 days and I tried to distract my mind from this feeling, you probably will not even think about everything that I described above, but this is really the most ‘embarrassing’ (I guess, sinse autor give me his responsibility to do that comic) moment in the whole comic and thank Lord we just passed it.. No more awkward situations next 1-3 parts. So yeah, next pages the rate of the narration is leveled.

Oh, why am I bombing? Pfft, because it’s my half-day work in total. Consider this my salary for work - anger at these two panels.

However, as I said before, there are no useless places in the comic. This place is only sagging and it would have been worthwhile to either skip or explain otherwise. BUT it is important as a piece of the puzzle for the storyline why later we will be very worried about the characters. I just feel sorry for my time here and I feel terrible. Let’s not create more useless places.

I like the difference in the pony’s parameters here. I think you will notice soon through more panels of delche that these ponies have a difference not only in fur, color or hairstyles. I thought over their habits for a while, this is also noticeable as someone who behaves, that they took with them on a dangerous journey. My friend, also an artist, asked if I would like to draw children’s books. I dono’ if this is an insult or a compliment.. as he said that I would be the best at it. Hmm. Now it bothers me! Well, it’s good, because it’s content that everyone could watch, that is, children too. It’s a wider audience than what I’m doing here and doing in general. However, the level of achievements for children and adults is way different. We all live because our brain wants to develop defomin, otherwise we get depressed, so we need to experience new experiences as often as possible. With the story in the same way, we need the character to pass the tests and always develop nonstop, doin’ new things. However, a child doesn’t need to know things like divorce or tax problems. This is the problem of a person who began to live alone, this person is probably around 18 years old. Or the content for kids cannot tell a clear story about the disappointment of a man for his race due to the cruelty of their country leader or the depression of a young girl who moved from the village to the big city and found work in the cheep restorant, continuing to work there for 5 years without promotion forward at all. This is a more challenging experience for people aged 25-30. And do you know how complicated subjects do for businessmen and directors of big firms people 40 years old and how difficult it is to please these people so that they really could be surprised/cry in their years with their experience? These people have seen everything in their lives and only the most-most challenging writers can please their needs.

So I don’t know if this is a compliment for me personally. Kids go to the forest with a net in their hands on the monster.. yeeeeah.. Here is a story which is worthy of an adult artist?

The answer is - look for a good writer. Usually the artist doesn’t win anything if the writer doesn’t know how to write A children’s story written by a genius is better than a thousand banal serials about relationships for adults)
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