ok so here is the comic and it’s about one of the royal mummies coming back to life and well you’ll see in part 2 but he does no harm but the other pony is freaked out.
 
so how is this comic? well lets see
 
characters: the characters look good but they could be better, i want to do a show accurate vector look but without using the tool for vectoring because idk how to do it but this is fine but again working with a mouse is not easy
 
layout: i wanted to go further but i decided to do a part 2 soon after this but if future comics i’ll plan out the story and see where it will be a fitting end to a 4 or more panel comic, but this one just ended up like this, but then it will be a multi parter and i don’t want that so i have to do this
 
lighting and shadows: it looks good from the beginning but kinda degrades at the end because…well using a mouse is hard but i still like how it looks.  
background: the backgrounds are improving to me but the ending well i got into a rush and want to get done (something i should learn is to take my time) but i will do better once i get my equipment but once again, it will take a while for it to look good
 
i hope i will continue to improve soon and comparing my old comics to my newer ones i say i’m doing pretty well, i hope you enjoy this and my AU so far because i’ve been planning alot and practicing too but remember if necessary i will only do single artworks for a certain part of a story if it does not need a comic or it could be still one or two or more panels idk well see but what matters is the story and it will become a more slice of life thing idk what genre my comics are but i’m just making it as i go but i will try to keep consistency so again i hope you enjoy and have a nice day
 
p.s one part of the comic is based on the 1931 (?) the mummy and the part when he wakes up but this one is a bit different
 
i forgot his wings but i will put them on the character so i will put them on later you will see it on deviant art