Well, this is the page again, but on, english because some people told me to translate it to english….so… here is it.  
My english is veeeeeery bad, so, if one of you wants to help me to translate to english im very happy with you ;D.
 
Here is it the original Spanish version:  
hosendamaru.deviantart.com/art
 
This is a preview, i want to show you how is gonna look the comic before launch the first pages, so, tell me if im ready to start the lineart of the first pages.
 
Esta es una preview, queria mostrarles como se vera el comic antes de lanzar las primeras paginas, asi que, diganme si estoy listo para comenzar a trabajar en el delineado de las primeras paginas.