An attempt to improve an admittedly awful one from earlier.
 
I moved her elbow up and out so her left arm isn’t so short and misshapen. I narrowed her waist and left shoulder, and put more emphasis on her breasts, to try to give her a more feminine form. And I made her face longer, rounder, and narrower.
 
Thanks to Cosmas-the-Explorer for the helpful feedback. Hopefully I’ve faithfully captured your suggestions.
 
Constructive feedback welcome and appreciated.
 
Edit: Someone apparently marked my old one as a duplicate, so here’s the link back to the model photo.