Fanfiction Feedback! SFW Version

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I had an idea for a story where Luna would come across some creature trapped in limbo because of something she did as Nightmare Moon. She’s sorry about what happened,but has no idea how to fix things. Maybe she’d receive help from some ancient Ally of hers, similar to Loki and the Frost Giants. As the show moved farther and farther away from that,I thought about rethinking the concept with Starlight but the show never gave any indication her reach went much farther than her own town.

I had an idea for a fanfic that satirizes cliches in mlp fanfics

Octavio Pie is the Pie’s long lost family member that came back after a long hiatus of whatever happened to him.

I’m currently writing a Power Rangers fic featuring a bunch of other characters popping up to unite against a common enemy.  
I’m not good at synonyms,so thank God I have a thesaurus.  
I’ve only done one introduction and I have no idea how to do the others. I’ve figured out who meets who, most of the villain’s involved,and some tie-ins to continuity.