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Hi. I am unoficially editing a story to make it less gay. "[Here is an excerpt":](https://pastebin.com/XuKzXhDS). Contains my version and the original. I hope you find my changes amusing and/or gib feedback.  
And how could I forget the [source material](https://www.fimfiction.net/story/20/21/antipodes/antipodes-chapter-21). Pretty old fic too.